Lady Pirate

this is a very good start to an Urban Fantacey. The strange man with the sword was a very intresting point, and then Elenor appears out of nowhere. --I could ...

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I really like this, and it's a great title, and you discriptions are really good, and very detailed. Very well done.

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This is good, you have some really good discriptions here, that really, really paint a good picture. You sliped up a few times, but that should be able to fix. ...

The king sized king-size would say better room the furniture,to the closet furniture, to mansion must of belonged mansion must have or must've You gave up your were tired You ...

This is good, short but good. I think all the grammer has been pointed out, so we can skip that part of the crit. His name is: Helsing, if he ...

Ah, I love this character, he's very refreshing, and unique as is you style. I like the way you write, it's a very good different. Your discriptions are wonderful, and ...

You have some great discriptions here such as: cigarette perched precariously between his thin lips. You've got some intresting characters here, a ver good job. My hat's off to you. ...

Sweet, PM and tell me when you post it, so I can read it, I'm pretty stoked now.

The bird needs a little more focus. I really liked the one of the roses.

I like the first one, with the starts, I think it looks really cool. :D

These are all really, really great. I love the colors, and I love to hike so I see a lot of nature, and you've done a really good job of ...

Wow, these are incredible, my jaw in on the floor!

I really liked it as well, and I, too, found nothing wrong with it. It is very powerful in my opinion. Your imagery is great. --I'm looking foward to the ...